The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013
The representation below compares the percentage of American citizens, who eat out fast foods throughout a decade. At first glance is evident that
overall
, people
usually go to fast food restaurant
weekly and monthly and more often than not eat more frequently Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
or
Correct word choice
apply
while
same
percentages belong to Correct article usage
the same
who
prefer not Correct pronoun usage
those who
or
rarely Fix the infinitive
to or
eating
out.
Regarding the given information, individuals Wrong verb form
eat
are
ate Unnecessary verb
apply
convenient
food once a week and Replace the word
convenience
one
or twice a month in 2003. The quantity of each of which was around 30% and has had more difference in amount comparing to each other. Correct your spelling
once
On the contrary
, the number of people
who do
so weekly in 2006 touched a peak at about 33% and Wrong verb form
did
then
it has
dropped by around 8% in 2013 respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
More over
, as it Correct your spelling
Moreover
clear
in 2013 Add a missing verb
is clear
the
more Correct article usage
apply
people
tend to eat once or twice a month and in
a result it hits a climax at around 33%.
Change preposition
as
On the other hand
, the number of people
who tend more toward eating every day compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
who
never ate out Correct pronoun usage
those who
are
slightly less. and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
story can be related to who
either ate out several times or rarely by approximately between 15% And 20% respectively.Correct pronoun usage
those who
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