The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989
The presented list gives data on changes in average
prices
of buildings in two spans of 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared with the
prices
of 1989.
Overall
,
it is clear that
New York, Madrid and London experienced a
period
of remarkable changes in house
prices
during 1996 and 2002 .
By contrast
, Tokyo did not show any
noticeably
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change related to an increase. Looking at the first part of the given chart in detail, it is evident from
interval
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between 1990-1995 that there is no
markedly
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shape except a negative
rises
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. The
prices
in Madrid and Frankfurt ranged from 1% to 2.5%
while
the costs of New York's houses fell
until
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a
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minus 5%.
At
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the
period
the figures
of
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Tokyo and London were below over 5%
at
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minus side.
According to
the second time
period
,1996-2002, the
prices
of housing surged to more than 10% in London and they escalated by 5% and 4% in New York and Madrid respectively. In Frankfurt, the amount of house
prices
formed approximately 1%.
However
, which form should be marked is that the house
prices
were signed by minus 5% negatively over the
period
in
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1996-2002 as they were compared to their
prices
in 1989
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, period with synonyms.
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  • fluctuation
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