The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000and 2010.
These pies graphs display the percentage of
students
in an England University
who know how to speak a different Correct your spelling
English university
language
between 2000 to 2010, having as features Change the capitalization
Spanish
spanish
, french, Change the capitalization
Spanish
Germany
and other languages or two Replace the word
German
language
Overall
, in this
university, most students
speak Spanish in comparison with the other categories, and the percentage of German is the same of
those years. Change preposition
in
Also
, the data reduced
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was reduced
in
the category of no other Change preposition
to
language
, that
means the Correct pronoun usage
which
student
have been learning other kinds of Fix the agreement mistake
students
language
different to English.
In 2000, Spanish started with 30,
and went up 5 more in 2010, Remove the comma
apply
as well as
, the students
learn another language
,
since the percentage in 2010 rose 5 more.
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apply
however
, some features were down in 2010, as French having 15 and reducing to 5 less. Germany kept the same values and the data for the two languages was the same as well with 10.
In conclusion, the data have been increasing according to
the students
who is
learning another Change the verb form
are
language
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