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The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000and 2010.

The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000and 2010.
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These pies graphs display the percentage of
students
 in an
England University
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English university
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 who know how to speak a different
language
 between 2000 to 2010, having as features
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Spanish
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spanish
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Spanish
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, french,
Germany
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German
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 and other languages or two
language
Overall
, in
this
 university, most
students
 speak Spanish in comparison with the other categories, and the percentage of German is the same
of
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 those years.
Also
, the data
reduced
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was reduced
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in
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 the category of no other
language
,
that
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which
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 means the
student
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students
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 have been learning other kinds of
language
 different to English. In 2000, Spanish started with 30
,
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 and went up 5 more in 2010,
as well as
, the
students
 learn another
language
,
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 since the percentage in 2010 rose 5 more.
however
, some features were down in 2010, as French having 15 and reducing to 5 less. Germany kept the same values and the data for the two languages was the same as well with 10. In conclusion, the data have been increasing
according to
 the
students
 who
is
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 learning another
language
 without matter which one, since the number reduced half of.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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