You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour.You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour.In your letter Explain the problem Suggest s solution Say what action you will take if the situation not improve
Dear Sir or Madam
I am your next-door neighbour you know my name is Arthur.Dom 5 .
I am writing
this
letter to you in order to correct all your
bad tricks that you Change the pronoun
the
commit either
.
Wrong verb form
committed
Firstly
,you turn on the TV at maximum volume, moreover
,you don't turn off the TV until the morning,this
is still nothing,but it interferis
when you are with a child or when you just want to sleep.
Correct your spelling
interferes
Secondly
,you listen to music loudly and sing very badly ,but I dont
mean anything bad but Correct your spelling
don't
instead
that you need to listen to music quetly
.
Correct your spelling
quickly
Thirdly
,our childrens
recently Correct your spelling
children
children's
quarrel
over you,my child Wrong verb form
quarrelled
come
into the house with tears and he told me that you Wrong verb form
came
hag
offended him,I was shocked.
Correct your spelling
had
Hovewer
,I found out that you Correct your spelling
However
also
hit him in the face for which he is simply a child .
Unfortunately,I am forced to write a statement in ordered
the eliminate all my Replace the word
order
also
your problems live
in peace and happiness.
Yours sincerely
ArthurCorrect word choice
and live
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Group related information together and develop paragraphs fully.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs for formal letters. 'Dear Sir or Madam' works, but be more formal and polite in the closing such as 'Yours faithfully'.
coherence cohesion
Aim for one clear idea per paragraph and develop each one thoroughly with explanations or examples.
task achievement
Address all parts of the prompt clearly: describe the problem, offer a solution, and state the action you will take if things don't improve. Include more details for each part.
task achievement
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter. Avoid accusatory language or overly casual expressions.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.