The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process illustrates a Marine animal lifespan named the salmon and how the cycle is repeated from an egg to an adult during 3 distinct stages.
The first stage of its life begins with laying eggs under small stones through reeds in the upper river, which have the slowest pace with water flow. When they hatch, the small fry stays there for about half of a year until it reaches 3-8 cm.
Then
the little fray migrates to a downstream river with a fast flow of water. In this
stage, it grows to roughly 12-15 cm and remains there for a 4-year period. After
this
period passes, it is time for the Second migration of this
fish to the open sea. The adult salmon maintained there for approximately 5 years. Additionally
, during these measured years its length reaches 70-76 cm. Lastly
and most importantly, belongs to its returns back to the upstream for reproduction. And the entire journey is repeated all over again.Submitted by amirisoodabeh24 on
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