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The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable energy in the United States in 2009- 2019.

The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable energy in the United States in 2009- 2019.
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The bar chart represents the
electricity
 generated by renewable and
non renewable
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energy
 in the United States in the
year
 2009- 2019. I will explain in the following paragraphs.
Overall
, it is observed that coal
has
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produced more
energy
 in the
year
 2009 and natural gas
has
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produced more
electricity
 in
the
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2019
whereas
 wind is a renewable
energy
 which produced high
energy
 sources in the
year
 2009.
To begin
 with , petroleum produced only 57
billion
kilowatts
 per hour in 2009 .
Whereas
, renewable sources, nuclear and natural gas generated. more than 400
billion
kilowatts
 of
electricity
 in 2009.
On the contrary
, coal stands in the first position to generate
electricity
 with 1756
billion
kilo watt
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kilowatt
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 per hour.
In addition
, in 2019 natural gas produced higher
electricity
 as compared to other sources . Petroleum produced only 40
billion
kilo watts
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kilowatts
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 per every hour.
Moreover
, renewable energies
such
 as solar, wind, geothermal, plant or animal matter,
hydroelectric
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and hydroelectric
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 contain
lower
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less
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electricity
 compared to
non renewable
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non-renewable
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 energies. Wind
produces
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produced
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 94
billion
kilowatts
 in 2009 and it increased to 300
billion
kilowatts
 in 2019. Geothermal
generate
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generates
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 lower
energy
 in both
the
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years. In 2009, solar
energy
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1billion
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1 billion
kilowatts
 and it raised to 73
billion
kilowatts
 in the
year
 2019. Plant or animal matter produces 54
kilowatts
,
58
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and 58
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kilowatts
,
hydroelectric
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and hydroelectric
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 produces 273
kilowatts
 for both years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, energy, year, billion, kilowatts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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