The pie chart shows the population of countries of the European Union in 2021 by percentage.

The pie chart shows the population of countries of the European Union in 2021 by percentage.
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The pie chart reveals data about the share of eight countries’ population which collectively assembles the European Union, in the year 2021.
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, it is readily apparent that the rest of the EU made up the largest segment, followed by Germany and France. Of particular note is that both Italy and Spain accounted for more than one-tenth.
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the other three nations’ contribution was almost insignificant. Looking at the countries with the highest percentage, the rest of the EU accounted for nearly a quarter, with the figure amounting to 25,7%,
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the share of Germany and France in the total population of the European Union was reported to have made up less than
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fifth, to be specific with their respective figures accounting for 18,6% and 15,2%. As far as countries with a minority division are concerned, Italy comes first with its rate that totalled 13,2 per cent. Spain,
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, had almost one in ten in
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year, 2021.
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, the other three
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figures’ were almost of no account, ranging from a low of 3,9 in the Netherlands to a high of 8,4 in Poland, with Romania (4,3) in between.
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