You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Sam ,
I am writing
this
a
letter to apologise . As , I will not go to Canada , soon . And I must change Correct article usage
apply
my
dates of the Change the word
the
visiting
.
Let me explain my situation , my Replace the word
visit
brother
will wed these days
. I have heard the Fix the agreement mistake
this day
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
new
today . I am very amazed Correct your spelling
news
from
it . And they are going to married these days. So I cannot your country.
These days , I must help Change preposition
by
to
my Change preposition
apply
brother
. Because ,
I have Remove the comma
apply
sweared
to my Correct your spelling
sworn
brother
. And my brother
is very busy now . He is engaged with
Change preposition
in
action
of the wedding. Add an article
the action
Also
, I must go with him for suit of wedding . He is my little brother
, so I must help to
him . His wedding is very important for me . Because he is my Change preposition
apply
the
best Correct article usage
apply
brother
.
I have decided to change the date of the flight ticket to be in a month instead
of two week
. I hope you will Change to a plural noun
weeks
free
Add a missing verb
be free
this
day . I am very penitent . I apologise only again Change preposition
on this
to
. See you in a monthReplace the word
too
you
.
Thank you
RuxshonaCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphs to separate different ideas, ensuring that each paragraph contains a single idea. For example, one paragraph should explain the event, another should contain the apology, and a third should suggest new arrangements.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a logical progression of ideas throughout the letter. Establish clear connections and transitions between paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Open the letter with a proper greeting such as 'Dear Sam,' and always include a closing salutation like 'Best regards' or 'Sincerely' to maintain an appropriate structure.
task achievement
Expand on the explanation of the event to include more details, ensuring the reasoning for the change is clear and understandable.
task achievement
Maintain a friendly and polite tone throughout the letter, as this is a message to a friend. Apologize sincerely, but keep the overall tone positive and accommodating.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,