You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Sam , I am writing

this

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letter to apologise . As , I will not go to Canada , soon . And I must change

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dates of the

visiting

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visit

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. Let me explain my situation , my

brother

will wed

these days

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this day

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. I have heard the

the

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new

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today . I am very amazed

from

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it . And they are going to married these days. So I cannot your country. These days , I must help

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brother

. Because

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I have

sweared

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to my

brother

. And my

brother

is very busy now . He is engaged

with

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action

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of the wedding.

Also

, I must go with him for suit of wedding . He is my little

brother

, so I must help

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him . His wedding is very important for me . Because he is my

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best

brother

. I have decided to change the date of the flight ticket to be in a month

instead

of two

week

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. I hope you will

free

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this

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day . I am very penitent . I apologise only again

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. See you in a month

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. Thank you Ruxshona

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coherence cohesion

Use clear paragraphs to separate different ideas, ensuring that each paragraph contains a single idea. For example, one paragraph should explain the event, another should contain the apology, and a third should suggest new arrangements.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a logical progression of ideas throughout the letter. Establish clear connections and transitions between paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Open the letter with a proper greeting such as 'Dear Sam,' and always include a closing salutation like 'Best regards' or 'Sincerely' to maintain an appropriate structure.

task achievement

Expand on the explanation of the event to include more details, ensuring the reasoning for the change is clear and understandable.

task achievement

Maintain a friendly and polite tone throughout the letter, as this is a message to a friend. Apologize sincerely, but keep the overall tone positive and accommodating.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
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19
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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The Closing

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