Your neighbours have recently wrtten to you to complain about the noisefrom your house/flat. write a letter to your neighbours. in your letter - Explain the reason for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take
Dear Sirs or Madams,
I am writing in replying to your
complain
about the noise from our flat which three days ago Replace the word
complaint
happend
at midnight.
I Correct your spelling
happened
would
tell you Wrong verb form
will
reasons
Correct article usage
the reasons
of
why producing a loud noise Change preposition
apply
make
noise pollution in the apartment Verb problem
creates
Firstly
, we rented this
new apartment a week ago as
Correct word choice
and as
result
we are Correct article usage
a result
unfamilar
with the new rules of Correct your spelling
unfamiliar
this
apartment secondly
, transport
of Correct article usage
the transport
furnitures
to Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
this
new place causes a
lot of sounds Correct article usage
the a
spontanusly
.
I would apologise Correct your spelling
spontaneously
you
Change preposition
to you
about
the event which Change preposition
for
happend
Correct your spelling
happened
haphazadly
. Correct your spelling
haphazardly
On
that Change preposition
In
situation
most of the neighbours slept Add a comma
situation,
while
we had
changed the furniture.
I will assure you that Unnecessary verb
apply
first,
be more
calmer Change the word
apply
then
cut down exchanging
furniture during the night.
I look forward to hearing back from you Change preposition
on exchanging
immidiately
.
yours Correct your spelling
immediately
faithfuly
,
GholamiCorrect your spelling
faithfully
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Tone
Make sure to use a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. While the tone is relatively suitable, there are moments where informality creeps in, such as the word 'haphazadly' which is also misspelled. Aim for a polite and apologetic tone that demonstrates understanding and respect for the reader's concern.
Structure
Organize your ideas clearly into paragraphs with each paragraph focusing on a single idea. In this case, consider separating the explanation from the apology, and the description of the action you will take into distinct paragraphs.
Task Response
Address all parts of the prompt effectively. While the letter attempts to explain and apologize for the noise, it could include a more detailed plan for future prevention and consideration for the neighbors' peace.
Logical Structure
Improve the logical structure of your letter by providing a clearer sequence of thoughts. Begin with the greeting, followed by an acknowledgment of the complaint, an apology, an explanation, and then a detailed description of future actions.
Grammar and Accuracy
Correct spelling and grammar mistakes to improve clarity. For instance, 'wrtten' should be 'written,' 'haphazadly' should be 'haphazardly,' and 'immidiately' should be 'immediately.' Also, pay attention to sentence structure and punctuation.
Closing
Close the letter appropriately with a polite and formal sign-off. 'Yours faithfully' is correctly used when the name of the person is not known, but ensure to capitalize it properly as 'Yours faithfully,'.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.