Many people these days rely on traditional medicines rather than going to doctors. Is this a positive or negative development?

In these latter days, more and more people are choosing traditional

medicine

instead

of conventional

treatment

. In my opinion,

this

is a negative development which can lead to subversive consequences,

such

as side effects, lost time and wasted money. One serious problem which can

be arise

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from using traditional

medicine

is that it can lead to negative repercussions for

patients

’ health. In comparison with

conventional

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way of

treatment

, traditional

medicine

has

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not

enough

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reliable and repeatable

researches

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that can

proof

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its safety.

As a result

, those

patients

who believe in traditional healing

practises

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have to take high risks of getting harmful side effects. Another negative consequence of traditional

medicine

should be mentioned. In some cases, the time for successful

treatment

is limited, so when it is spent on traditional curative procedures and remedies with doubtful effectiveness

patients

can

loose

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the opportunity to recover.

For example

, in

Russia

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there is a group of scammers who sell some herbal teas as a cancer

treatment

. Unfortunately, those

patients

who are desperately looking forward to effective cancer curation become the victims of

this

felony. They consume these teas spending their precious time with the hope

for

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healing but it will run to disastrous results.

Finally

, the prices of some healing procedures in traditional

treatment

clinics can be comparable with the costs in high-quality conventional hospitals.

However

, in the

last

case

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the expenses can be covered by

medical

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insurance policy, which has no

such

option for traditional

medicine

. In

this

way,

patients

have to pay an enormous amount of money for ineffective way of therapy and

eventually

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they will find themselves broken and with ruined health.

To sum up

,

although

traditional

medicine

becomes

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quite popular among

patients

, it has caused too many issues to be considered a positive trend.