The chart below gives information about how families in опе country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant
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illustrate
the ways Change the verb form
illustrates
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in how
how
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which
families
in a
one nation Correct article usage
apply
spare
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spared
theire
weekly wages in 1968 and Correct your spelling
their
in
2018.
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apply
In
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Overall
overall
, 1968
folks Change preposition
in 1968
have spended
mostly on food from Wrong verb form
spent
theire
weekly collection of money, and clothing , footwear and housing were the 2nd most spended ways in that year. Correct your spelling
their
there
Whereas
, in 2018 lesuire
activities made the highest Correct your spelling
leisure
quato
in weekly income from Correct your spelling
quality
families
and housing and transport were in 2nd and 3rd places awith
a close gap compared to 1968.
In Correct your spelling
with
details
,Fix the agreement mistake
detail
families
have spended
35% Correct your spelling
spent
from
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of
there
weekly wages ,and in 2018 the amount paid for Correct your spelling
their
foood
was Correct your spelling
food
nealy
half Correct your spelling
nearly
from
it. Change preposition
of
However
, rest
of the methods hit a lower price Correct article usage
the rest
presentage
compared to Correct your spelling
percentage
the
food in Correct article usage
apply
such
as 2nd highest spend on while
housing and clothing, footwear achieves a 10% from weekly income, and all the rest were below the 10% from weekly income with fuel and power spend approximately around 6% depicting as the lowest.
On the otherhand
, in 2018 Correct your spelling
other hand
families
spended
mostly on leisure activities with nearly 22.5% spending from what they had for a week.Yet, they had a more Correct your spelling
spent
balance
distribution of Correct your spelling
balanced
there
money Correct your spelling
their
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
compred
to the year 1968 and for housing and Correct your spelling
compared
transport
they Add a comma
transport,
spending
Wrong verb form
spent
nealy
19% and 14% orderly.Correct your spelling
nearly
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