The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures of populations in three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo and Shanghai.

The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures of populations in three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo and Shanghai.
The bar charts illustrate data about the actual and predicted populations in the different cities. Jakarta, Sao Paulo, and Shanghai between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it is undeniable that Sao Paulo had the most
population
size. Followed by Shanghai and Jakarta respectively.
Moreover
, In terms of actual populations compared with predicted apparent that actual populations were higher than predicted. From Sao Paulo, it can be seen that the
population
started at approximately 17
million
in 1990. In terms of forecast, the
population
in 2000 was approximately 24
million
.
Whereas
the real
population
was 22
million
. In 1990 Shanghai's
population
was 12.5
million
.
Although
in 2000 the actual
population
slightly decreased to 11
million
also
the predicted
population
was 15
million
.
Furthermore
, Jakarta information shows that started at 8
million
in 1990 and significantly increased to 13.5
million
in 2000 and had predicted around 13
million
.
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