The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie chart shows the
avergae
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average
consumption
of sodium
, saturatedfats
and added sugars by meal. All three categories of nutrients may be harmful to health if over-consumed.
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saturated fats
saturated fat
Overall
, while
the intake of sodium
and saturated fat is higher at dinner
at
any other meal, added sugar is eaten most in snacks.
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Sodium
consumption
is highest at dinner
and second highest at lunch, making up 43% and 29% of total sodium
consumption
respectively. The proportions of this
type of nutrient taken in at snack time and breakfast are the same, both at 14%.
Dinner
and lunch also
account for the largest and the second largest
proportions of total saturated fat intake respectively, at 37% and 26%. Add a hyphen
second-largest
However
, a greater proportion is eaten at snack time than at breakfast at 21% and 16% respectively.
Compared with the other two nutrients, add
sugar has a relatively low Wrong verb form
added
consumption
level at dinner
, at 23%. It is snacks that are the greatest source of sugar intake, at 42%. However
, like the other nutrients, it is also
consumed least at breakfast, at only 16%.Submitted by narawriteshare9 on
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