The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The representation below compares the percentage of American citizens, who eat out fast foods throughout a decade. At first glance is evident that
overall
, people
usually go to fast food restaurants weekly and monthly and more often than not eat more frequently, while
the same percentages belong to those who prefer not to or rarely eat out.
Regarding the given information, individuals ate
convenience food once a week and once or twice a month in 2003 Correct pronoun usage
who ate
was
around 30% and had more differences in amount Correct subject-verb agreement
were
comparing
to each other. Change the form of the verb
compared
On the contrary
, the number of people
who did so weekly in 2006 touched a peak at about 33% and then
it dropped by around 8% in 2013 respectively. Moreover
, as it is clear in 2013 more people
tend to eat once or twice a month and as a
result
it hits a climax at around 33%.
Add a comma
result,
On the other hand
, the number of people
who tend more toward eating every day compared to those who never ate out is slightly less. and this
story can be related to those who either ate out several times or rarely by approximately between 15% And 20% respectively.Submitted by amirisoodabeh24 on
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