The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101

The

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line graph

demonstrates a statistic about the

birth

and

death

rates in dynamic throughout a period from 1901 and 2101 in New Zealand. It is evident from the data that both the

birth

and

death

rates grew,

moreover

, there was a peak

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children

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birth

in a period

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1965 and 1970.

Overall

, from 1901 until 1921 was a stable increase in both rates,

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1921 witnessed a local peak of the

death

rate

,

while

the

birth

rate

fall

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.

After

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the

death

rate

steadily inclined with

a

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small fluctuations.

Furthermore

, the

death

rate

even expected to increase

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faster tempo, but in 2050 it is predicted to stop increasing and remain approximately at the same point. It is interesting to note that, the

birth

rate

had a more unstable dynamic. There was a dramatic

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starting from 1941 until 1961, followed by a peak in 1961.

After

this

numbers fluctuated. The

birth

rate

is projected to slowly

deacrese

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decrease

.