The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram explains the
process
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of making the
coffee
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beans
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to be sold in packages.
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the
process
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consists of 11 steps starting with picking the
beans
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up from the
coffee
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trees and ending with packing processed
coffee
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beans
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into jars. At the beginning of the
process
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, the
coffee
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beans
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are collected from trees and
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they are dried on the ground under the sun.
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, dried
coffee
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beans
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are roasted and
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they are cooled immediately.
Next,
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they are ground and mixed with hot water. Once
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is done, the mixture is strained and
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they are frozen. In the next stage of the
process
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, the frozen liquid is ground again and dried in a vacuum. In the
last
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step of the
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, the finished products of
coffee
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beans
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are packed into jars and ready to be sold later.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, coffee, beans with synonyms.
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