The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the
process
of making the Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
beans
to be sold in packages. Use synonyms
Overall
the Linking Words
process
consists of 11 steps starting with picking the Use synonyms
beans
up from the Use synonyms
coffee
trees and ending with packing processed Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
beans
into jars.
At the beginning of the Use synonyms
process
, the Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
beans
are collected from trees and Use synonyms
then
they are dried on the ground under the sun. Linking Words
Firstly
, dried Linking Words
coffee
Use synonyms
beans
are roasted and Use synonyms
then
they are cooled immediately. Linking Words
Next,
they are ground and mixed with hot water. Once Linking Words
this
is done, the mixture is strained and Linking Words
then
they are frozen.
In the next stage of the Linking Words
process
, the frozen liquid is ground again and dried in a vacuum. In the Use synonyms
last
step of the Linking Words
process
, the finished products of Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
beans
are packed into jars and ready to be sold later.Use synonyms
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