Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

People might think that

university

students

should

study

subjects

that they want to pursue. But others might believe that

universities

should just provide

subjects

that will be useful for the future of their

students

. Well,

universities

should let their

students

explore their potential skills and let them choose what

subjects

they want to

study

.

Universities

should let their

students

choose what

subjects

they want to

study

as different individuals have their own

interest

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and

career

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to achieve.

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this

,

universities

could help their

students

to

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improve their field of expertise

as well as

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them in achieving the student’s path of

career

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.

This

could

also

increase the number of

students

that join the

university

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because they offer several options for the student to pick.

For example

, if a

university

offers a larger number of

subjects

, the

students

could pick 2 to 3

subjects

that they think they have potential in and many people will

also

consider joining that

university

that is

not stuck with just one or two

subjects

for them to

study

.

However

, many people believe that

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should just allow

subjects

that will be used in the future,

such

as hospitality, engineering, and others.

This

is because other

subjects

may be a waste as there is less demand in that field of expertise and if there

are

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, it will only pay a

little

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amount when the job is finished.

For example

, the

university

allows art

subjects

.

This

could help the student in improving their skills and

interest

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. But when they want to look for a job, it will be difficult for them, because they will need many years of experience and need their own uniqueness to be put on the art. It will give them a lot of money, but as a painter, it is not a promising

career

to do and will not give a stable financial need. In conclusion, my

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of view is that

universities

should offer a wide choice of

subjects

for their

students

to explore their variety of interests. It will allow their

students

to explore

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numerous

field

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of expertise that potentially the student will have. By

this

,

students

could

also

determine their

career

path and what they want to pursue.