The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours. Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention about
the dysfunctional Change preposition
to
garbage
collection
system. The garbage
collection
vehicle is
not coming Verb problem
has
in
our locality Change preposition
to
from
Change preposition
for
last
two weeks. Correct article usage
the last
As a result
, garbage
is pile up.
Furthermore
, a putrid odour is coming from garbage
which is creating health problem
for my family and neighbours. Some of them Fix the agreement mistake
problems
has
been affected with diarrhoea. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
This
has turned out to be nuisance
for Add an article
a nuisance
entire
locality of Add an article
the entire
bird road
society.
I would like to suggest a few suggestions that can be immediately implemented and can help in controlling the situation. The Correct your spelling
Bird Road
garbage
collection
be done on daily
basis and there should be Correct article usage
a daily
fixed
schedule for collecting Correct article usage
a fixed
garbage
from bird road society
daily. Correct your spelling
Bird Road Society
Also
, garbage
collector makes sure that garbage
do
not pile up Change the verb form
does
in
any Change preposition
at
collection
point. If they find garbage
is
piling up they should immediately bring Unnecessary verb
apply
to
Correct pronoun usage
it to
notice
of higher authorities.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John NashAdd an article
the notice
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. Although you have done so for the most part, slight overlaps between suggestions and their impacts can be separated more distinctly.
task achievement
Develop ideas further with more specifics. For instance, you may describe the exact frequency of missed garbage collections and provide additional, varied consequences or examples of how the issue is impacting the community.
coherence cohesion
To improve logical structure, you could organize the points more methodically, perhaps by discussing the problem, its impact, and suggestions in separate paragraphs and ensuring a smooth logical progression between them.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to provide a polite and formal conclusion that reiterates the need for a timely response, as a way of adequately closing the letter and reinforcing its main purpose.