The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours. Suggest what should be done about the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention

about

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the dysfunctional

garbage

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collection

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system. The

garbage

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collection

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vehicle

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not coming

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our locality

from

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last

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two weeks.

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garbage

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is pile up.

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, a putrid odour is coming from

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which is creating health

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for my family and neighbours. Some of them

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been affected with diarrhoea.

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has turned out to be

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locality of

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society. I would like to suggest a few suggestions that can be immediately implemented and can help in controlling the situation. The

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be done on

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basis and there should be

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schedule for collecting

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from

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daily.

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garbage

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collector makes sure that

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not pile up

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any

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point. If they find

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piling up they should immediately bring

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notice

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of higher authorities. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, John Nash

yash334Wed Feb 07 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. Although you have done so for the most part, slight overlaps between suggestions and their impacts can be separated more distinctly.

task achievement

Develop ideas further with more specifics. For instance, you may describe the exact frequency of missed garbage collections and provide additional, varied consequences or examples of how the issue is impacting the community.

coherence cohesion

To improve logical structure, you could organize the points more methodically, perhaps by discussing the problem, its impact, and suggestions in separate paragraphs and ensuring a smooth logical progression between them.

coherence cohesion

Make sure to provide a polite and formal conclusion that reiterates the need for a timely response, as a way of adequately closing the letter and reinforcing its main purpose.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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