The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The given representation depicts
,
the development plan Remove the comma
apply
that
of a Correct pronoun usage
apply
town
center
, known as Islip from what is being now. At first glance is evident that Change the spelling
centre
vast
number of constructions are estimated Change the article
a vast
the vast
such
as dual
carriageway around the Correct article usage
a dual
town
, which is the obvious one. Regarding to
the nowadays plan, the Remove the preposition
apply
town
center
is contained Change the spelling
centre
of
a main road from west to east Change preposition
apply
that is
passed through 2 raw
of Correct your spelling
row
shops
. This
part of town
is predicted more expanding. For example
, upside
raw of Correct article usage
the upside
shops
would be modified as a shopping center
. Change the spelling
centre
moreover
, some construction namely bus
station, car park and new housing Correct article usage
a bus
is
contributed to Change the verb form
are
perior
Correct your spelling
prior
shops
location.
On the other hand
, can be seen the main road is changing into Add an article
a pedestrian
pedestrian only
Add a hyphen
pedestrian-only
while
the south shops
remaining
still. Wrong verb form
remain
In addition
, the housing area right under southern
Correct article usage
the southern
shops
is going to expand while
the park is decreasing in its
size. The school location will be unchanged and a carriageway is called Dual expected to be built all around the Correct pronoun usage
apply
center
.Change the spelling
centre
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