Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
government
should give funding to an Correct article usage
the government
artist
who have low salary
to help them Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
to
continue their work. I totally disagree with that statement and discuss the reason why Verb problem
apply
this
isn't best
way to help our Add an article
the best
artist
in the essay.
To begin
with, proving
funding is not one of the good things to help our Verb problem
providing
artist
who struggling to finish their job. Because there a lot of field
to handle by Change to a plural noun
fields
government
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the government
such
as education, health
and environment. For example
, in the healthy
field. The Replace the word
health
government
should providing
proper Change the verb form
provide
be providing
facility
and Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
building
for Replace the word
buildings
health
like medicine, doctor
, Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
nurse
and Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
the
Correct article usage
apply
operation
to Fix the agreement mistake
operations
running
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run
hospital
. There Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
considerable
Add a missing verb
is considerable
money
to provide health
facilty
and so on. Correct your spelling
facility
therefore
, providing financial assistance only solves the problem temporarily and just helping
at the surface. Giving proper Wrong verb form
helps
health
facility
and Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
entitle
Replace the word
entitlement
of
education which Change preposition
to
are
they Unnecessary verb
apply
needs
for their lives.
Change the verb form
need
Furthermore
, providing funding to the artist
just
a short way to Add a missing verb
is just
reducing
Wrong verb form
reduce
problem
in Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Add an article
the artist
artist
life. In my point of view, Change noun form
artist's
Correct article usage
the increase
increase
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increased
demanding
Replace the word
demand
of
Change preposition
in
art
market should be provided by Correct article usage
the art
government
. Add an article
the government
For instance
, government
make Correct article usage
the government
a programs
to promote artwork by Correct the article-noun agreement
a program
programs
an artists
or make an exhibition to Correct the article-noun agreement
artists
an artist
provided
Wrong verb form
provide
artist
to share their work and Fix the agreement mistake
artists
also
earn money
for that event. The
result of Correct article usage
A
that
programs, we want to Correct determiner usage
those
rose
awareness of artwork, so the Verb problem
raise
artist
can earn Fix the agreement mistake
artists
money
by
Change preposition
through
own
work.
in conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
their own
artist
who earn Fix the agreement mistake
artists
low
Correct word choice
little
money
should not provided by give funding. But make their industry to
improve and develop so they can be spirit to make their own artwork Fix the infinitive
apply
while
the government
also
take care another
field to be focusedChange preposition
of another
.
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on.
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