The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table indicates the forested areas in 6 different parts of the planet. Units are measured in millions of hectares.
At
a
first glance, Correct article usage
apply
it is clear that
Europe
has the widest forest area throughout the period
with Oceania on the contrary
.
Europe
, South America
and Africa,
are the top three Remove the comma
apply
continent
with enormous forestland throughout the Change to a plural noun
continents
period
. At
the beginning, Change the preposition
In
Europe
and South America
started at much the same, 989 and 946, respectively. However
, while
Europe
experienced an upward tendency and reached the final number of 1001, South America
demonstrated otherwise
. Moreover
, Africa began at just below 750 before significantly declined
by 40 and ended with 691 in the final year.
Wrong verb form
declining
On the other hand
, North America
, Asia and Oceania, have a noticeable discrepancy with the previous continents. North America
had 708 million hectares of land covered with forest in 1990. From this
point onwards, it slightly dropped by 3 millions
and levelled out until the end of the Change to singular
million
period
. Furthermore
, Asia started at 576, subsequently
, it moderately decreased before rising to 584 in 2005. In addition
, Oceania saw a consistent downtrend by a million each period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, period, america with synonyms.
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