The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table indicates the forested areas in 6 different parts of the planet. Units are measured in millions of hectares. At
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first glance,
it is clear that
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Europe
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has the widest forest area throughout the
period
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with Oceania
on the contrary
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.
Europe
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, South
America
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and Africa
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are the top three
continent
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with enormous forestland throughout the
period
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.
At
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the beginning,
Europe
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and South
America
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started at much the same, 989 and 946, respectively.
However
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,
while
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Europe
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experienced an upward tendency and reached the final number of 1001, South
America
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demonstrated
otherwise
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.
Moreover
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, Africa began at just below 750 before significantly
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by 40 and ended with 691 in the final year.
On the other hand
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, North
America
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, Asia and Oceania, have a noticeable discrepancy with the previous continents. North
America
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had 708 million hectares of land covered with forest in 1990. From
this
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point onwards, it slightly dropped by 3
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and levelled out until the end of the
period
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.
Furthermore
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, Asia started at 576,
subsequently
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, it moderately decreased before rising to 584 in 2005.
In addition
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, Oceania saw a consistent downtrend by a million each
period
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, period, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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