The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table chart below illustrates the British
households
demand Fix the agreement mistake
household
belonging
from 1972 to 1983.
The data has been calibrated in percentage.
Verb problem
apply
Overall
, we see 8 categories ( central heating, television, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigirator
, washing machine, dishwasher, Correct your spelling
refrigerator
telephone
). Television with refrigerator had the highest per cent in general.
Correct word choice
and telephone
Furthermore
, the amount of using central heating and telephone increased approximately twice to the end of analysis
(64% and 77%). Add an article
the analysis
In contrast
, vacuum cleaner in 1983 finished their production. Refrigerator changed only on 21%.
In addition
, video begun
to exist in 1983 and had 18%. Add the auxiliary verb
began
has begun
Dishwasher
appeared in 1978 and increased to 1983 to 5%. It is the lowest per centFix the agreement mistake
Dishwashers
,
because each category had at least 33% in 1972. The most useful consumer durables in the beginning Remove the comma
apply
is
vacuum Change the verb form
are
cleaner
and Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
television
(93% and 87%).Fix the agreement mistake
televisions
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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