In many countries, children in remote villages and communities have no access to education. some people believe that the best solution will be provide teacher and schools. others think that providing computer and internet in these areas will be a better solution. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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who live in remote areas

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have been lagged behind the proper education system.

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some people argue that it is the best solution

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teachers

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, others contend that

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is important

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useful tools for learning

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as free

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and computers. In my view, the right solution for the issue would be providing

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and

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. If the government provides free

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and computers to all students in rural

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, it would give them many

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to learn things via online platforms and video classes. Most importantly, they would not be isolated from others.

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using these devices, they will gain more friends through social

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exchanging

their experiences and cultures, making them feel not lonely.

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, they become able to connect

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children

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who live in

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of the world, helping them improve

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skills.

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, in my country, governments provided laptops to each

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in primary

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in rural

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, which resulted in

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of

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language in many of them.

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Nevertheless

, it is vital to provide

schools

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and

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, which has far more benefits than providing

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technological

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assistance

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reason is that the

internet

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generates a

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of unnecessary information. Most

children

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have no capability to generate a bunch of information, making them less concentrated

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learning. In

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contrast, in the school environment, students will become more disciplined under the

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' direction.

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, playing with peers in the school

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them more physically healthier, and less stressful. In conclusion, I believe that providing

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and

schools

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is more crucial than simply giving free access to the

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internet

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and computers for the

children

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in regional

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