Write about the following topic. It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
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children
reading fluency.
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technology
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Then
, limited experience with books
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books
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children
closer to the book will answer why children
recently difficult to read.
To prevent this
, there are several programs made for training children
's reading fluency. First,
parents
should concious
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children
. Then
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children's
books
especially recently there are a lot of books
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children
to understand phonetics. Another method that parents
can try is practicing
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read aloud
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read-aloud
parents
, children
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will activate and think if reading is a meaningful experience. Fix the agreement mistake
brains
Children
also
learn the phonetics with the intonation from parents
and this
could boost children
reading skills.
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children
will have interesting reading activity
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parents
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structure
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development
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examples
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grammar & clarity
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conclusion
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