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The charts provide information on the occupation destination taken by
anthrophology
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anthropology
alumnies
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calumnies
alumni
work
after five years. Overall
, more than half of the graduates student
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graduate students
worker
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workers
while
some of them worked as part-timer
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part-timers
part-timer
plus post Fix the agreement mistake
part-timers
graduated
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post-graduates
study
, full-timer postgrad study
and remaining
worked unknown or unemployed. Correct article usage
the remaining
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came
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those
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the government
they
who worked in private companies.
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those
noticable
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noticeable
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features
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of
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data is graduated
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that graduated
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students
choosed
to Correct your spelling
chose
work
as permanent staff, 52%. While
one third
of the remainingAdd a hyphen
one-third
,
decided to Remove the comma
apply
work
as part-timer
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part-time
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workers
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decided to not Add a hyphen
one-third
work
. 8% decided to be full-time worker
with Fix the agreement mistake
workers
post graduated
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post-graduate
study
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studies
uindentified
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unindentified
job
. And 5% remaining worked as Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
part-timer
postgrad study
.
In regards to the income after five years working
, the ones who worked in Change preposition
of working
principal
sector are the dominant player who Add an article
the principal
achived
the highest income among the three of Correct your spelling
achieved
employement
. Followed by 40% freelance Correct your spelling
employment
consultant
and 30% who worked in private companies.Fix the agreement mistake
consultants
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