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The table given illustrates the percentage of schoolchildren attending four groups of secondary schools from 2000 – 2009.

The table given illustrates the percentage of schoolchildren attending four groups of secondary schools from 2000 – 2009.
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The
given
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table chart illustrates the information of pupil's numbers, who
attend
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attended
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 different groups of secondary
institution
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institutions
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 from the year 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen, except
Community
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in Community
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 schools, the ratio of
pupils
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pupil
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 attendance in three batches has
been
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declined throughout the given time period. In 2000, the proportion of students
presence
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 in Specialist
school
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schools
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 was 12% which later on fell down by 1% in next years 2005 and 2009 respectively. There were 24%
learners
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of learners
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 who attended Grammar classes in 2000, and in 2005, it dropped
at
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to
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 19% followed by the year 2009 only 12%
students
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of students
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 were left
for
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 study. There were 52% and 12% scholars who attended Voluntary-controlled and
community
 schools separately. The portion of Voluntary
community
 attendees decreased in 2005,
while
 the numeracy rates of
Community
attenders
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attendees
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 increased 3 times more as compared to previous years. Followed by the same
the
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trend in 2009, once again Voluntary attendance dropped and
Community's
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the Community's
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students
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student's
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 presence surged.
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