The charts below show the avarage percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The chart illustrates the percentages in four different
meals
of three types of nutrients which are unhealthy to consume continuously.
There are four different meals
which are divided into breakfast,lunch,dinner and snack.Meanwhile, these meals
included three types of nutrients which are sodium,sugar and saturated fat.
It is clear that
most of the majority add sodium intake
for their dinner meals
with 43
% contribution.As for their Correct article usage
a 43
meals
in
breakfast and Change preposition
apply
snack
shared the same rate 14% and lunch with 29% in salt Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
intake
.
According to
the data, saturated fat shared the same proportion with sugar intake
in breakfast type
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breakfast-type
meals
with 16% shares but it appear
to be Change the verb form
appears
lowest
figure in Change the article
the lowest
snack
with 21% to 42% ,respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
Additionally
, for lunch meals
slightly highest percentages in
saturated fat compared to sugar Change preposition
of
intake
with 26% to 19 % ,respectively.Submitted by tifjong on
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