The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the recycling plastic bottles process. In general, there are 9 stages with picking up them as the first stage and producing them into products in the final stage.
Once the trash has been picked from a trash can as we can see in front of our houses or everywhere in the street, they are loaded onto a lorry. At
this
point, the trash will be separated into dry and wet parts. Recycling is a large process, After separating the waste there will be a compressing stage where they are compressed into blocks to take less space. Linking Words
The following step is
crushing them into smaller ones to wash them.
When the recycling goes to the production of plastic pellets, the pellets are Linking Words
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ready for heating to form raw materials. Linking Words
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Raw materials are packed and ready for producing new products. Linking Words
Finally
, products are ready to use as the production process is finished.Linking Words
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