You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates British
Emigration
to several destinations in five countries from 2004 to 2007. Overall
Australia has the biggest number
of emigration
compared to other countries. On the other hand
, New Zealand and The USA have the lowest number
of emigration
.
The emigration
to Australia growth fluctuate
with the highest Change the verb form
fluctuates
populations
up to fifty Fix the agreement mistake
population
thousand
in 2006. However
, New Zealand
Change noun form
Zealand's
emigration
from British has
Wrong verb form
had
stable
decrease from 2004 to 2007 with the lowest Correct article usage
a stable
number
twenty thousand
in 2007. Similarly
, the growth of emigration
from British to The USA was unsteady between 2004 until
2007 with the lowest Correct word choice
and
number
of people in 2005 and the highest number
in 2004 and 2005.
In addition
, Spain has gradually decrease
from up to thirty Change the verb form
decreased
thousand
people in 2004 to below thirty thousand
people in 2007. Finally
, the number
of emigration
in France has enormously Replace the word
emigrants
grow
from 2004 to 2005 but the growth Change the verb form
grown
is rapidly decrease
between 2005 Change the verb form
is rapidly decreasing
is rapidly decreased
until
2007.Correct word choice
and
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emigration, number, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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