The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.

The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
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The bar charts illustrate information about the population living in rural urban and cities who were born in
Australia
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or outside the country from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that in 1995 the number of
people
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from cities was the highest for both types of born. Living in the towns are lowest. In the case of 2010 cities have the highest populations.
However
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, rural areas are the lowest. In 1995
people
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born in
Australia
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were 50.
whereas
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people
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from outside 60.
Moreover
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,
people
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in town born in
Australia
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and outside were 20 and 10.
Furthermore
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, rural areas depict born in
Australia
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30 and outside 40. In 2010, the town's population born in
Australia
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was dramatically reduced from 20 in 1995 to 15. In the case of rural born in
Australia
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was significantly decreased from 30 in 1995 to 15.
Also
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, when compared
people
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born in and born outside
Australia
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were 65 and 80 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, people with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Migration patterns
  • Population distribution
  • Rural
  • Urban
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Growth rate
  • Settlement patterns
  • Residential categories
  • Urbanization
  • Infrastructure
  • Economic opportunities
  • Lifestyle preferences
  • Residential mobility
  • Urban planning
  • Governmental policies
  • Community impact
  • Data analysis
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