The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
The
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bar charts illustrate the number of individuals born in Australia and outside Australia in different regions in two separate years, 1995 and 2010.
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, most of the people, either born in or outside Australia, chose to live in cities for both years. In 1995, the population staying in rural areas accounted for the second largest.Submitted by candylaw on
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