The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the cost monthly change of
three
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different metals
such
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as
copper
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,
nickel
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and
zinc
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in 2014.
Overall
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, all of the commodities experienced similar fluctuations trends in a year and
zinc
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had a higher rate
at the end
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of the period. In the first
three
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months, the price of
nickel
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and
Copper
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has slightly decreased, compared to
Zinc
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which has a small increase in February.
Then
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,
three
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months later, the percentage of the price for the metals clearly experienced the greatest month-to-month volatility. In the mid of the year, the
copper
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payment was stable at -1%,
While
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the
Zinc
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and
Nickel
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reached lower rates at -1% and -3% respectively. Next month, the
three
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types of alloys show a
slightly increased
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of around 2% and indicate stable costs until September. There is a moderate rise in each product in October before a sharp rise to finish the year with
Copper
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and
Nickel
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(1%) and
zinc
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(2%).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words three, copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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