You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, member, costs.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to complain about
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the
sports
course in college. My name is Jacob and 20 years old I interested
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in sports
club
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clubs
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I am really interested this
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in this
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have a lot of sport's
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this
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I have a few question
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club
. Firstly
could you tell me information about the number of members your
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? I think it is sizeable
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a sizeable
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. How much cost for
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necessary
training
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club
offer
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offers
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of it is members.
Thank you for considering my inquiries. I look forward to hearing back from you soon and hopefully becoming a member of your respected
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the convenience
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club
.
Your
faithfully
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logical structure
Ensure that your letter has a clear and logical structure. Introduce yourself and your situation in the first paragraph, outline your interest in the club and reasons for contacting in the second paragraph, and list your specific questions in the third paragraph.
greeting and closing
Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs for semi-formal letters. Start with 'Dear [Name]' if you know the manager's name, or 'Dear Sir or Madam' if you don't. Conclude with 'Yours faithfully' if you didn't use a name, or 'Yours sincerely' if you did.
single idea per paragraph
Keep each paragraph focused on a single idea. For instance, the first paragraph can be about introduction, the second about your reasons for being interested in the club, and the third about your specific questions.
complete response
To fully achieve the task, make sure to address all three bullet points in the prompt with relevant details: introduce yourself, explain your interest in the club, and ask detailed questions about the facilities, membership, and costs.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout your letter. For a semi-formal letter such as this one, you should be polite and professional but can show some personal interest or enthusiasm.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.