You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter Introduce yourself Say why you are interested in this club Ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members, costs.

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Mehribon and I study at Cambridge

college

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College

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.I am writing

this

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letter to express my interest in joining your

sports

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club. I am a

sports

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person and I do sport every day .

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Moreover

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Moreover,

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sports

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are beneficial

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to my

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health and it keeps me fit.Unfortunately ,our college does not have

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sports

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a sports

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club .I saw an advertisement

your

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for your

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sports

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club and your location is near my college. I would like to get more information.

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,I would like to know how big

gym

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the gym

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area

and

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what types of equipment are available .

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, I would be grateful if you could tell me about the facilities. How many people

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are at

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your place and how much does it cost? I would appreciate it if you could send the details to my email. I hope you will consider my request. I would like to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Mehribon

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single topic.

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When introducing each question or point of interest about the club, it would help to provide a little more context or detail to show genuine interest and research.

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Maintain a consistent and respectful tone throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Check for grammar and punctuation accuracy to enhance clarity.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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