You have just started a course in a college which has no facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of private sports club. In your letter Introduce yourself Say why you are interested in this sportc centre Ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities,members,cost
Dear Sir or Madam
I hope that you find
this
letter in good health. My name is Shodiyona and I am 16 years old.
I want to enrolled
on Wrong verb form
enrol
sports
Correct article usage
a sports
center
when I Change the spelling
centre
started
Wrong verb form
start
in
Change preposition
apply
a
college. Correct article usage
apply
However
college is so old-fashioned and no Add a comma
However,
sports
club. I don't want to study in
there but I am studying unwillingly because of my parents.
One day I was walking along the road with my dog. I saw Change preposition
apply
this
sports
centre.
Do you have karate
course in your centre? I am keen on karate. Correct article usage
a karate
By reason
Change preposition
Reason
of
I used to be Change preposition
apply
karate
girl before. After Correct article usage
a karate
that
I and my family moved Add a comma
that,
another
city Change preposition
to another
that
I stopped Correct word choice
where
sport
. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
However
, perhaps in Correct article usage
the morninv
morninv
or evening when I have Correct your spelling
morning
mourning
a
leisure time Correct article usage
apply
that
I Correct pronoun usage
apply
do
workout for my health and perfect body. Verb problem
work
Still
Correct pronoun usage
It still
workout
so difficult Correct your spelling
works
to
me I have no idea why. So I want to Change preposition
for
off
the gym and I found your Verb problem
go to
sports
center.
I would be grateful whether
Correct word choice
if
yoh
could tell me what the price is Correct your spelling
you
in addition
to I would like to know more about Add an article
the center
a center
center
. If you could possibly send me Change the spelling
centre
message
.
Thank you in advance Add an article
a message
dear
Sir or Madam.
Yours faithfully,
ShodiyonaAdd the comma(s)
, dear
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coherence cohesion
Your letter should have a clear introduction, one or more body paragraphs, each with a single main idea, and a concise conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear purpose and connect smoothly to the others.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to use an appropriate greeting and closing. You have done well with the closing, but consider using a more formal greeting such as 'Dear [Name of Manager]' if known, or 'Dear Manager' to make it more suitable for formal correspondence.
task achievement
Address each point of the task separately, ideally in its own paragraph. You should introduce yourself, explain why you're interested in the sports center, and then ask questions about the club's facilities, members, and costs. This structure helps ensure that you fully cover the task requirements.
task achievement
A suitable tone for formal writing should be maintained throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language and keep the focus professional. This includes avoiding contractions, casual expressions, and maintaining a level of formality in line with writing to someone you have not met before.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.