Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased •Explain why you are not happy with the purchase •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to express my deep grievances on the service that was provided by your company.

Few

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days ago , I

have

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apply

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ordered

online

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an online

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Ninja food processor and microwave, both

give

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me trouble and not

working

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work

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appropriately. I

have seen

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an advertisement in the newspaper a few days before which was published by you and assured everyone to get

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a 50

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% discount on every electronic

items

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Thus

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, I ordered these two products because the deal

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to be super amazing,

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however

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I got the delivery super late . My

overall

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experience was very bad and I feel disappointed . Anyway, when I was trying to operate them both failed at the same time and there are

few

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scratches on

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. I want you to refund my money or you can replace it with brand new items which will work accurately and save

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energy and time. I am looking forward to hearing from you .

Yoursa

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Yours

faithfully, Sam

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure a clear introduction, body, and conclusion structure is followed to enhance logical structure and coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use separate paragraphs to discuss separate ideas; one for the product description, one for the issue, and one for the resolution.

Coherence & Cohesion

Open your letter with a proper greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Company Name] Team,') and close it appropriately (e.g., 'Yours sincerely, [Your Full Name]').

Task Achievement

Fully address all three bullet points with detailed information. Clarify what specific aspects of the product are unsatisfactory and why.

Task Achievement

Maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter, being assertive but not overly aggressive or emotional.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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