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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of goods vehicles which are
road
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, water,
rail
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, and pipeline in the
UK
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 from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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transportation
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 in the
UK
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 is increasing year by year.
Furthermore
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, the position of
rail
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 vehicles
have
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 the second position in the starting point which is below
road
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transportation
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. In 1974, the proportion of the
million
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tonnes
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transportation
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 using
road
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 was 70
million
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tonnes
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 which was the highest in the
UK
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.
Moreover
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, the gaps between
road
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 and water vehicles in 1974, 1986, and 2002 fluctuated range which are 30
million
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tonnes
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, 10
million
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tonnes
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, and 35
million
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tonnes
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, respectively.
On the other hand
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,
rail
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transportation
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 slightly increased which was approximately 2
million
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tonnes
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.
In addition
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, the range between pipeline and
rail
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 had dramatically decreased from 30
million
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tonnes
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 to 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986.
Moreover
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, goods
transportation
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 in the
UK
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 had replaced the position between water and
rail
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transportation
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, rail, uk, transportation, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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