The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line chart illustrates the amount of goods vehicles which are
road
, water, rail
, and pipeline in the UK
from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
, it is clear that
transportation
in the UK
is increasing year by year. Furthermore
, the position of rail
vehicles have
the second position in the starting point which is below Change the verb form
has
road
transportation
.
In 1974, the proportion of the million
tonnes
transportation
using road
was 70 million
tonnes
which was the highest in the UK
. Moreover
, the gaps between road
and water vehicles in 1974, 1986, and 2002 fluctuated range which are 30 million
tonnes
, 10 million
tonnes
, and 35 million
tonnes
, respectively.
On the other hand
, rail
transportation
slightly increased which was approximately 2 million
tonnes
. In addition
, the range between pipeline and rail
had dramatically decreased from 30 million
tonnes
to 5 million
tonnes
in 1986. Moreover
, goods transportation
in the UK
had replaced the position between water and rail
transportation
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