The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

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The line chart illustrates the amount of goods vehicles which are

road

, water,

rail

, and pipeline in the

from 1974 to 2002.

Overall

it is clear that

transportation

in the

is increasing year by year.

Furthermore

, the position of

rail

vehicles

have

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the second position in the starting point which is below

road

transportation

. In 1974, the proportion of the

million

tonnes

transportation

using

road

was 70

million

tonnes

which was the highest in the

Moreover

, the gaps between

road

and water vehicles in 1974, 1986, and 2002 fluctuated range which are 30

million

tonnes

, 10

million

tonnes

, and 35

million

tonnes

, respectively.

On the other hand

rail

transportation

slightly increased which was approximately 2

million

tonnes

In addition

, the range between pipeline and

rail

had dramatically decreased from 30

million

tonnes

to 5

million

tonnes

in 1986.

Moreover

, goods

transportation

in the

had replaced the position between water and

rail

transportation

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