The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Depicted in the line graph is data about the consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers. It compares the data between the years 1975, 1980, 1985, 1990, 1995, and year 2000. The foods that were observed were pizza, fish and chips, and hamburgers.
Overall
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, it can be observed that fish and chips went from the highest in 1975 with 100 times eaten per year to less than 40 in 2020.
On the other hand
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, both pizza and hamburgers had a significant increase from 1975 to 2000.
Furthermore
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, it can be seen that pizza was the lowest at the start of the observation and
then
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went to second place three decades later. Another noteworthy aspect is the gap between junk food. Hamburgers had the highest increase with less than 20 at the start and ended up with approximately 100 in the 20s. Going second was the iconic Italian food that
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off lower than hamburger, to more than 80 in three decades later.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Consumption
  • Fast food
  • Australian teenagers
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Significant rise/decline
  • Compare
  • Contrast
  • Implications
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fish and chips
  • Data points
  • Period (time frame)
  • 25-year period
  • Paraphrase
  • Notable features
  • General increase
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