The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the annual carbon dioxide
pollutions
per person in Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
the
several countries from 1967 to 2007.
It is noticeable that the Correct article usage
apply
emissions
significantly increased for Italy and Portugal. By contrast
, the pollution from other countries like Sweaden
and the United Kingdom declined in the fourth decades.
In 1967, the lowest Correct your spelling
Sweden
countries
who were produced pollution was Portugal Fix the agreement mistake
country
which
the number of Correct your spelling
with
pollutions
only 1.6 Carbon dioxide emissions
in metric tonnes
. Furthermore
, emissions
for Italy and Portugal was
dramatically increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
fourth
Correct article usage
the fourth
decades
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decade
which
the second decade in 1987 was approximately 3.6 metric Correct word choice
and
tonnes
emissions
for Portugal and 6.8 metric Change preposition
of emissions
tonnes
emissions
for Italy. Change preposition
of emissions
In addition
, in 2007, the gap of gasses between Italy and Portugal reached 2.5 metric tonnes
Change preposition
of pollutions
pollutions
.
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pollution
On the other hand
, air pollutions
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pollution
of
Sweden Change preposition
in
had been
increased from 1967 to 1977, after that Verb problem
apply
emissions
was decline
a half from Change the verb form
declined
emissions
in the first decade which
the amounts were 6.5 metric Correct pronoun usage
apply
tonnes
, 5.9 metric tonnes
, and 5.5 metric tonnes
in 1987,1997, and 2007, respectively. Therefore
, emissions
of the United Kingdom was
significantly decreased year by year which were 10.5, 10, 9.7, 9.5, and 9 during Unnecessary verb
apply
period
from 1967 to 2007.Add an article
the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pollutions, emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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