The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the annual carbon dioxide
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per person in
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several countries from 1967 to 2007. It is noticeable that the
emissions
significantly increased for Italy and Portugal.
By contrast
, the pollution from other countries like
Sweaden
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Sweden
and the United Kingdom declined in the fourth decades. In 1967, the lowest
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who were produced pollution was Portugal
which
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the number of
pollutions
only 1.6 Carbon dioxide
emissions
in metric
tonnes
.
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,
emissions
for Italy and Portugal
was
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dramatically increased in
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decades
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which
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the second decade in 1987 was approximately 3.6 metric
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emissions
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for Portugal and 6.8 metric
tonnes
emissions
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for Italy.
In addition
, in 2007, the gap of gasses between Italy and Portugal reached 2.5 metric
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pollutions
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.
On the other hand
, air
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pollution
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of
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Sweden
had been
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increased from 1967 to 1977, after that
emissions
was decline
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a half from
emissions
in the first decade
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the amounts were 6.5 metric
tonnes
, 5.9 metric
tonnes
, and 5.5 metric
tonnes
in 1987,1997, and 2007, respectively.
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,
emissions
of the United Kingdom
was
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significantly decreased year by year which were 10.5, 10, 9.7, 9.5, and 9 during
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from 1967 to 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pollutions, emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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