The chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The given pie charts illustrate on how much percentages of five types of books sold by a bookseller over a period of 40 years between 1972 and 2012. The number of sales of these books is shown in three charts in the years1972, 1992 and 2012

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

46 words

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The chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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