The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph
explain
the rate of people who Change the verb form
explains
living
in Change the form of the verb
live
own
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their own
home
and on Fix the agreement mistake
homes
the
rent in Correct article usage
apply
the
England and Wales in 1918 and 2011.
Overview, with the expectation of 1971, Correct article usage
apply
rest
of the given years show the incline and decline trends in the accommodation.
As per the provided information, in the initial year, Correct article usage
the rest
maximum
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the maximum
percentages
of people was on rent which was Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
calculate
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calculated
more
than 75%, Change preposition
as more
however
almost 2 time
less have their own home. Following by the Change to a plural noun
times
nest
given year, the proportion of owned living Correct your spelling
next
place
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places
was
slightly increased and rented Unnecessary verb
apply
was
dropped by 10%, Unnecessary verb
apply
moreover
after the gap of almost 14 years, the data stay
untouched. Wrong verb form
stayed
In contrast
, the
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a
differences
of 15% was Fix the agreement mistake
difference
notice
in both given categories Change the form of the verb
noticed
which
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with
latter
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the latter
stood
at Wrong verb form
standing
highest
with Correct article usage
the highest
appropriate
60% in 1961.
Moving towards the rest of the Correct article usage
an appropriate
detail
, surprisingly, household owning and renting accommodation was Fix the agreement mistake
details
same
in 1971 with half. From 1981 to 2001, the percentage of homeowners was significantly raised and reached Correct article usage
the same
at
70% from 60% at the same time, rented Change preposition
apply
home
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homes
was show
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was shown
was showing
downward
trend which Add an article
a downward
witnessed
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was witnessed
at
one third in 2001. Interestingly, the percentage of rented houses was around 38%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
owned accommodation was seen 25% more from then
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