the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. summarize the information, and make aconparison . write at least 150 words

#proportion #household #income #five #european #countries #food #drink #entertainment #information #aconparison

The graph illustrates 5 Europeon

countries

monthly family income that have been used at various items. There are 4 subjects: "Food and drink", "Housing" etc and "Housing" has the highest percentage which is 37% and "clothing" has 7% which is the lowest percentage.

First,

France, Germany and UK spent more money to the "Housing"

then

other items. 31%, 33% and 37% are the percentages of the each

countries

Then

Turkey consumed at "Food and drink" the most which is 36% and Spain recorded 31% at the "Food and drink" item

also

In addition

, UK has the same value: 11% of the each "Clothing" and "Entertainment". Next, "Clothing" item has the lowest value in the each 4

countries

. The

countries

are France, Germany, UK and Spain.

Moreover

, France recorded 7% and Spain recorded 8% which are the lowest percentages.

Lastly

, in the "Entertainment" item, 10% of Turkey is the lowest and 19% of Germany is the highest percentage of the chart.

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