The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.
It is true that fossil
fuels safe
Correct your spelling
fuel-safe
alternatives
exploration and development Fix the agreement mistake
alternative
is
should Unnecessary verb
apply
give
more priority in Wrong verb form
be given
world
because of Add an article
the world
its
non-renewable ability. I totally agree with Correct pronoun usage
their
this
given statement.
There are many reasons why fossil fuels
alternatives
is
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are
must
you need globally. The first reason is that it is not renewable natural source. If people Correct article usage
a must
use
it again and again. environment will suffer in future. For example
, western nation
used to take Fix the agreement mistake
nations
stander
lifestyle.For Correct article usage
a stander
that
they Add a comma
that,
use
coal and other materials for making new products. Moreover
, today
climate trend Change noun form
today's
to change
from previous weather Change the verb form
changes
condition
to new Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
new
recorded extreme weather Remove the redundancy
apply
condition
, and it Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
occeard
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occurred
occurs
for
too much Change preposition
to
use
of fossil fuels
.
Furthermore
, if you get alternatives
that are safe and we developed, it help
to reduce Change the verb form
helps
Correct article usage
the axcess
axcess
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excess
access
use
of fossil fuels
. As a
result
our Add a comma
result,
futuregenaration
code Correct your spelling
future generation
get
a new fresh environment compared to Change the verb form
gets
Correct article usage
the recent
recent
.That not only Correct pronoun usage
recent one
save
nature but Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
also
save
lives Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
form
Correct your spelling
from
danger
Replace the word
dangerous
situation
. Fix the agreement mistake
situations
In
addition
fossil Add a comma
addition,
fuels
are alternatives
also
helpful for balance
of natural Add an article
the balance
a balance
resources
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resource
use
.When new source
are developed well,people can Fix the agreement mistake
sources
use
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
intesd
of Correct your spelling
instead
intend
focus
on Wrong verb form
focusing
re-newable
sources.
In conclusion, fossil Correct your spelling
renewable
fuels
decline is play
a concern attitude for Verb problem
apply
environment
.I believe that for saving Add an article
the environment
this
important sourcesafe
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SourceSafe
alternatives
exploration and development compolsory
.Correct your spelling
compulsory
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introduction conclusion present
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
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