The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the proportion of
households
in owned and rented accommodation
in England and Wales in the period of 1918 to 2011.
From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that while
the preference for rented accommodation
steadily decreased, there was a surge in the number of households
in owned accommodation
during the given period.
In 1918, there was only 20% of the households
lived in owned accommodation
while
almost 75% of the households
lived in rented accommodation
. However
, for almost 60 years, the trend of owned accommodation
has shown to increase and rented accommodation
had a gradual decline. Whereas
in 1971, there was a similar percentage of households
that lived in owned and rented accommodation
. After that, the proportion of households
in owned accommodation
continued to rise up to 65%, while
the preference for rented accommodation
has
experienced an enormous drop to around 35% in 2011.Unnecessary verb
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