The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table below illustrates the main four reasons for adult's desire to visit
arts
events in the UK over the past 20
years
. What is noticeable, is that a tendency to attend
arts
due to
the reason to see a specific performer was the major,
while
the least important was work and business purposes. In general, the percentage of society who visited the
arts
due to
the desire to see specific artists was quite stable throughout the twenty-year period,varying from 58% 20
years
ago, 55% 10
years
ago and 56% today. Indicators which show people's involvement in
this
field
due to
the business or work goals show similarity in stability , but from 6% 20
years
ago to 11% present-day. Looking more closely, it can be seen that the percentage of people accompanying children has increased dramatically from 9% 20
years
ago to just under a quarter today.
On the other hand
, a reason for attending
arts
because of special occasions or celebrations has dropped significantly from 27% 20
years
ago to 20% 10
years
ago and it reached the lowest point of 9% today.
Overall
, a tendency to grow in
a
Correct article usage
the
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number of public who attend art accompanying children can be observed,
while
special occasions became the less common reason. It is predicted , that fewer people will choose to visit an
arts
event as a form of celebration.
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