Owning a home is more important than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

In today's time,

to

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own

an

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accomodation

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accommodation

is still considered to be the hardest thing to

accomplished

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in certain countries.

Moreover

, renting gives you the opportunity to get a

home

instead

of completely owning it. It is generally believed that

,

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to get

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your own

home

is

more

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preferable,

than

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paying monthly

installments

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for the place where you live.

This

essay will present the possible reasons behind it and will end up by stating my opinion.

To begin

with, getting your own

home

provides

an

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ample

of

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benefits to the individual. It gives a form of

self satisfaction

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, that we have achieved something in life. After getting a house, it gives the owner to present his own permanent landmark. In

this

Social and economic era, inflation of prices can be seen in daily life,

as a result

,

this

home

can be

also

considered as an asset and a future investment.

For example

, By having a personal

home

, many problems can

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solved. There is an obvious where we can assure that we have a roof on our head, and can live happily with the family. It is believed after getting one many things are done

by

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its

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own.

On the Other hand

, Renting is considered to be a fixed monthly payment.

Eventhough

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Even though

, there are many

people

who

earns

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a lot by renting their

accomodation

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accommodation

to

people

, only if they have a good income to invest. In today,

s

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's

time prices are changing day by day, and the same goes with the property. These are basically for the

people

who don't earn more and

as a

result

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they

rent

a place which is high in cost.

Moreover

, they can't invest or modify anything to the place of

accomodation

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accommodation

.

As a result

, they spend their entire life by giving

rent

.

For Instance

, In Brampton, it is believed that the owner of the houses

are

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making money from their tenants. Here these

people

can't do as per their needs and just follow the instructions given by the owner. In Conclusion,

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it depends on the person, whether to own a house or

rent

it. I personally believe that owning a house is more important than living on

rent

, as it has many positive results.

Furthermore

, it is

also

based on the individual's circumstances, that he can own a residence for his family or prefer to stay on

rent

.