You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The first picture illustrates the blueprint of a wave-energy
machine
and the second picture shows the options of its location .
Overall
, the
machine
will
needs
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water and
air
to
genarates
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generate
generates
electricity and the more deeper the placement of a wave-energy
machine
located in the sea , the better the output will
be reach
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be reached
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.
To begin
with, the
machine
is
devided
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divided
into two parts which are
lower
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the lower
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chamber
and
upper
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the upper
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chamber
.The lower
chamber
will
needs
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need
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to be filled with water.When the water level
arise
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rises
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, its
push
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pushes
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the
air
into the upper
chamber
.On the top of the upper
chamber
have
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are
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two holes and it
is use
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for removing any
excces
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excess
air
outside the upper
chamber
and collecting new
air
into the upper
chamber
.
Finally
, the movement triggers the turbine to
spine
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spin
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and
that is
how the electricity is being produced.
In addition
, The deeper the device
located
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in the sea, the more
eletricity
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electricity
will be produced , and the cost of an
installment
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instalment
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also
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is also
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much higher compared to the placement near the coast side which is
more
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apply
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cheaper and the output is lower.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, air, chamber with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wave-energy
  • renewable energy
  • electricity generation
  • sustainable
  • offshore
  • machine components
  • energy conversion
  • maritime
  • ecosystem
  • energy efficiency
  • environmental impact
  • marine life
  • flotation device
  • energy potential
  • anchorage system
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