the diagram illustrates the production of noodles and the manufacturing stages. describe it.

The diagram above illustrates the production of noodles and the manufacturing stages.

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, it can be observed that there are 8 phases of making noodles. The main two are transporting and packaging.

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with, the flour

were

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taken from the storage silos,

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then

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and then

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combined

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with water and oil inside the mixer. After that, it will produce dough sheets and later will enter the machine that cuts it into strips.

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the dough strips will be turned into noodle discs. After that, the noodle discs will be cooked with oil. After it

dried

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, it will be placed into cups. The spices and the vegetables will

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be placed inside the cups.

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, the cups will be

labeled

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and sealed

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it’s ready to be marketed.

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Feb 11, 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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126 words

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