the diagram illustrates the production of noodles and the manufacturing stages. describe it.

the diagram illustrates the production of noodles and the manufacturing stages. describe it.
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The diagram above illustrates the production of noodles and the manufacturing stages.
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, it can be observed that there are 8 phases of making noodles. The main two are transporting and packaging.
To begin
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with, the flour
were
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taken from the storage silos,
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then
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and then
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combined
it
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apply
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with water and oil inside the mixer. After that, it will produce dough sheets and later will enter the machine that cuts it into strips.
Next,
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the dough strips will be turned into noodle discs. After that, the noodle discs will be cooked with oil. After it
dried
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, it will be placed into cups. The spices and the vegetables will
also
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be placed inside the cups.
Last
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, the cups will be
labeled
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labelled
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and sealed
then
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it’s ready to be marketed.

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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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