People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic

In

this

modern era, human evolution is drastically increasing which

also

lead

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to a problem of larger

crime

rates. Some folks think that the most accurate method to decline

this

growing trend is to enforce longer prison time

while

others provide alternative solutions

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this

issue.I will explain both views with credible examples in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand,

Prision

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prison

helps to teach a lesson to individuals for their crimes. It changes their attitude and

estabilsh

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establish

dicipline

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discipline

among them.

Also

,

while

they are violent and

danger

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dangerous

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for our

socity

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society

,

prisions

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prisons

can keep them until they accept the peaceful way.

Furthermore

, the fact of getting

jail

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to jail

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after a

crime

also

produce

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fear among

persons

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people

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.

However

,Some other methods can be utilized to reduce the

crime

.

Firstly

, Schools can play a vital role

to teach

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in teaching

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children about the

concequensces

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consequences

of doing

a

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unforgiveable

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unforgivable

action which

develop

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a fear among

offsprings

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offspring

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to

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not

to do

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such

things in

thier

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their

entire

life

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.

Secondly

, Parents are the first

educater

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educator

educators

of any human being,they can educate

thier

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their

kids with morals,discipline and wisdom.

Finally

, the main and foremost reason to do

such

crimes is poverty. Valuable

companes

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companies

and meaningful events can be organized to tell poor people about

end

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of

such

a way and aid them somehow to reduce

thier

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their

chances of

doing

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bad choices. In conclusion,

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think that prisons are essential but rising jail time is only a temporary solution.

By using

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other essential ways can play a vital role

to make

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in making

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our world

crime free

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crime-free

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.