People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

argue that individuals who migrate to a new

place

should follow the practices and rituals which are native to that

place

.I completely agree with

this

opinion that

people

should follow the

traditions

of a new area where they

move

. First of all,

follow

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the

traditions

of a new

place

are

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not only

help

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us to mitigate the feelings of isolation but

also

a way of showing respect

to

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for

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others

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others'

other's

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beliefs.

For example

, if you

move

to a

country

like Australia where

christmas

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Christmas

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is celebrated with pomp and show, and when you

also

take part in these festivals preparation you

not

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do not

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feel

lonliness

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loneliness

in a new

place

.

Moreover

, it is

also

a method of displaying esteem for their moral values.

For example

, a person who adopts the

culture

of a nation

give

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the message that he

respect

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respects

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the practices and rituals innate to that

place

.

Thus

, following a

country

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culture

assists in removing

lonelinesss

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loneliness

and

also

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a way to show respect for their

traditions

.

Secondly

, if

people

follow the migrating

country

values it will assist them in building strong

relationship

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relationships

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with others and

also

provide more career opportunities.

To begin

with, when

people

try to absorb

in

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apply

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other cultures they get a chance to meet new

people

and they make friends

at

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in

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new

place

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places

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immeditely

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immediately

.

This

, in turn, will result in more employment opportunities as well.

Furthermore

, when individuals mix with the

country

culture

where they

move

it will

also

help them to increase their social circle and more jobs available to them as compared to those

people

who remain isolated.

For instance

, American research shows that

people

who diffuse

in

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other

culture

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cultures

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have

less

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fewer

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feelings of

home sickness

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homesickness

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than those who do not adopt.

Therefore

, adopting new

place

practices

also

assist

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assists

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in making new friends and finding more jobs. In conclusion,

i

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believe that following a new

place

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place's

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culture

and

traditions

only

have

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has

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benefits like, making new friends, more employment opportunities and no feelings of isolation.

However

, we should not forget

thier

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their

own customs

while

move

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moving

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to a new

country

.